One thing I loved in Souma's route was the fact that Miki moved on than pursue individuals unrelated to the death of his brother -- I think you really did it well! It's really outstanding, that I want to cry for him and the 'feelings of disappointment and failure' they both feel right now. And the fact that you made use of the fact that Miki ended up working with the new government as an officer settles that thought in Souma's route -- that even if he were misguided, he was still someone with reasoning and not primarily following his hate as an instinct.
Miki was still someone who would learn to live and grow if he was encouraged and supported by the people around him. And I love that you included Chizuru and Miki's doubts and concerns on their future and plans, it was so humane.
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hiraethum on Chapter 8 Sun 24 Aug 2025 02:23PM UTC
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