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  1. BlueStar1937 on Chapter 3 Mon 27 Feb 2017 09:08AM UTC

    Another brilliant chapter!
    So much happened in this chapter. Poor Len :(
    I wonder what Lisa whispered in the jerk's ear. Did she whisper she was breaking up with him and never look at her ever again or come near her? That she is sorry he was almost killed but she won't date a cheater?
    Yay! Lisa meets her brother's boyfriend (and finds out Barry's secret identity. Which is not really secret if you think about it. He tells a lot of people or has people find out. He really needs to work on that lol)
    Then Barry comforting Len. I think it makes their relationship stronger. Because, yeah, in the beginning you only want to show your strong points to the person you are trying to court. Show them that you can be there for them in times of needs ect. But I think a relationship starts to really develop once you show the weak points and moments of yourself and life. Len doesn't feel very comfortable showing his weakness but at the same time he doesn't run and hide from Barry. Showing that he is not perfect. A chance for Barry to be there and comfort Len like Len does for the people he cares and loves. A moment for them to start to grow further into their relationship. Showing that they can and will be there for each other through the good and the bad. That it is okay for them to admit they are not strong all the time and that they can always lean on the other for support in times of distress.
    Okay. Wow! I wrote a lot *hides*
    I want to write more but I will leave you alone with these parting words for now.
    Love your writing and look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing and sharing your work with us. We appreciate the time and hard work you put into writing. I hope you are well. <3

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    1. TheFightingBull on Chapter 3 Sat 15 Apr 2017 07:46AM UTC

      Thank you so much for your comment. It was lovely to read and I don't mind at all how much you write. I am very flattered and encouraged by your kind words about this story.

      I have been trying to keep this story fluffy but I think I'm too dark to keep it fluff only. Hopefully you like where this story goes. If you are caught up you know i am having computer troubles at the moment but I am not abandoning the fic. I swear.

      Thanks again for taking the time to comment and let me know you enjoy this story. It's always nice to know.

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