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1. Knight0fthewind on Chapter 4 Wed 19 Mar 2025 03:23AM UTC

   

   THIS WAS SO THRILLING. Them fighting alongside each other, everyone playing their part in the battlefield and sonic mistakenly saying shadow was SPECTACULAR. I especially loved the tension at the end where Lancelot makes sonic feel things, it’s so very cute. Your writing flows so well and I could picture each scene so vividly, the pacing is great!!!!!!!

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2. 1. Warp_luna on Chapter 4 Wed 19 Mar 2025 05:56PM UTC

      

      I was nervous about writing fight scenes tbh! I appreciate your comment so much!

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