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  1. zenoflee on Chapter 6 Tue 05 Nov 2024 02:56PM UTC

    OH MY GIOIDNES HWGAGSHSTEYSYSYSUSUDHS

    HOW DOES THIS KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AND BETTER!?!?!?!?!

    THIS FIC IS SO GOOD ITS A APOCALYPTIC LEVEL THREAT (pun intended)

    "The cold scent of his clanmates caught his attention."

    - WAIT HUH? 👁👄👁

    "The scents of Onewhisker and Tornear were evident in the flattened grass, though Crowpaw seemed to have branched off from them."

    wait wait wait wiat wait wiat-

    "The small tom’s nose wrinkled, it smelled like something was rotting nearby."

    -AAAAAAAAARGHHVVZJSHSHHQHAGAGSGAGAGAGGGGGSGWGQCXQXQXQXQXQXSXWXWXXQZZQQXXQXQXQCAGSHSIDJWJSKEKFJDKEJJSJDJSIWIDUDIWPQPPQLQOQOWOW0WUEJ2O1JW2UQ0SO

    THE WRITING IS SO GOOD YPU CAN FEEL FEAR IN 4 DIMENTIONS

    HOW ARE YOU GUYS SO GOOD

    AND WTH HAPPEN TO LEAFPAW

    DEADFOOT IS MOST COOLEST CHARACTER

    That Mudclan and Hawkfrost scene was woah-

    Like woah woah

    I really like how they ibteracted

    And the narration

    The narration if every charachter's PoV is really reallly on point!

    If i satled avout wvwrything i like about this my comment would be longer then the plot of Dragon Ball Z

    And its just this chaoter !

    Amazing writng and narration as alwats

    Dont mind emy typos getting worse

    THAT SCEEN WHERE GORSEPAW SAW THE 'red pelt' WAS SO ATMOSPHERIC!

    PEAK DELIVERY!

    TORNEAR MUST BE HIDING IN THAT HOLE!

    VUT WHERES CROW AND ONEWHISKER?!?!?!?!?

    GAH SO MANY QUESTIONS!
    SO MANY RISK!

    Ok that last scene where they r about to fight is the coolest scene i have scene in a fanficiton in a while

    Kudos again and again

    Thanks for the chapoter!

    And I still cant get my head around how the playlist is always so fittind

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 6 Wed 09 Apr 2025 11:34AM UTC

      Thank you so much!!! :3

      Apologies for taking awhile to respond. I’m glad you enjoyed the chapter, very lovely to hear :3
      There’s plenty more MudHawk to come, and zombies, zombies as well!!

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