I was wondering what would make this a downer, then realized someone dying would…and then I saw the title. So…go figure I don’t feel down. I’m a bit surprised Lina’s not telling Amelia what she’s up to (unless it’s to prevent Amelia from getting dragged into the mess if Lina’s caught since she’s technically innocent/knows nothing), even after the bad news. But, that’s how you hook the reader, and hook me, you have!
As to Eldoran, considering he is supposed to be in poor health canonically, it’s not too surprising when he does die in fanfics. Poor old man. I guess this would probably prevent Phil from getting out and having fun now, too, since he’d have to arrange for a funeral and all. Poor Phil, too.
Hahaha I'm glad that you're invested in the story! And I like your guesses about why Lina is not explaining her reasons. But I won't confirm or deny anything just yet 👀
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