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  1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 12:01PM UTC

    Yeah, there are a lot more kidnappings that need to happen. :) but we’ll get there when we get there! :)

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    1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 12:20PM UTC

      I only have two kidnappings left to write (and I'm looking forward to writing those), but yeah. I'll just worry about future works after I finish this. I should probably give myself some time before writing another fic as well.

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      1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 12:24PM UTC

        Yea! That’s sounding like a plan! Also, avoiding burnout is a very good idea!

        I think Stella (in the realm of the fae) should act very closed off, and maybe it should take a while for her to warm up to the new party members? :)

        Last Edited Wed 26 Jun 2024 12:28PM UTC

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        1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 12:42PM UTC

          Thank you for the idea! I was planning to make Stella at least a little more angsty around the second kidnapping, can I steal this suggestion again?

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          1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 12:49PM UTC

            Of course! Suggestions are meant to be shared! :) Also, I don’t think we’re gonna cover this in the main story, and I really like the Great Sage, soooo…… what is Rosemary’s (just had a good idea, to annoy her, some call her Rose/Rosie) backstory?

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            1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 01:04PM UTC

              ... um... I think I might have forgotten to write Rosemary's backstory, while going over her relationship (which I keep changing for some reason) with Darius (he's my EDL, in case you've forgotten. And everyone calls him the Dark Lord, sinces he's always insisting everyone call him that in every single version and also because his original name was actually Dark Lord but I changed it to Darius at some point).

              Also, I am now considering whether to have Darius call Rosemary Rosie, just to annoy her.

              Last Edited Wed 26 Jun 2024 01:11PM UTC

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              1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Wed 26 Jun 2024 01:28PM UTC

                I say you do it! Also, do they know of each other from before Darius was possessed? Or did they only meet each other after the possession?

                I could help you brainstorm a backstory real quick?

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                1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Thu 27 Jun 2024 05:17AM UTC

                  Sure! You can help with coming up with the backstory!

                  And Rosemary and Darius knew each other before the whole possession thing, if it helps with the backstory.

                  Last Edited Thu 27 Jun 2024 05:18AM UTC

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                  1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Thu 27 Jun 2024 09:56AM UTC

                    Alrighty! I have some questions just to make sure that you like this.

                    What realm do you want her to be from?
                    If it was the world or one person that was the closest to her, which would she let burn?
                    Does she have any immediate family?
                    What is her most important relationship?
                    How does she decorate her living spaces?
                    What one moment from her past drives her forward?
                    What does she want more than anything?
                    The trolly problem, five could die, or one could die, would she pull the lever to save the five but kill the one?
                    What is her relationship with Darius?

                    If you don’t have the answers, just tell me and I can work on it! :)

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                    1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Thu 27 Jun 2024 11:37AM UTC

                      Here's my answers:

                      1. I want her to be from Peculia!
                      2. If it was the world or one person that was the closest to her, she would let the world burn.
                      3. Yes.
                      4. ... um...
                      *Pineapple276.exe has stopped responding.*
                      5. I don't really know but I think she would try to make the interior look as cute as possible!
                      6. I don't know, I didn't really think about her past that much. TvT
                      7. ... how did I just realize that I barely thought anything through?
                      8. She would pull the lever. She would probably be angsty about it afterwards, but still.
                      9. As of right now (I'm sorry I change it all the time) , they have a sibling type relationship.

                      Also, now I'm a bit worried about giving you unnessecary work I could do myself since you already have a lot of stuff to write it's fine if you don't do it also i just realized that i might have to rework rosemary's entire character--

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                      1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Thu 27 Jun 2024 03:18PM UTC

                        No no! It’s perfectly fine with me! :) sure I have a bit of work to do, but so do you! So let’s get this done together! :) Besides, my newest Miitopia fic is only an idea right now! I don’t even know if it’s a good idea… :)

                        I think that I’m getting a feel of the kind of person that you want her to be. I’m going to make up a little story now, there are gonna be a lot of assumptions, tell me if you want me to change any details! :) I’m taking a load of inspiration from mythology.
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                        Peculia Is famously known for being uninhabitable, the only beings able to thrive there being of magical origin. But it is nice for a walk on occasion. One day, a couple was walking with their only child - a young boy. They heard a loud sound, and the young child snuck away to investigate, the parents quickly followed after their son. Once they had caught up with him, they saw him standing in front of a small infant, it was laying in a large rose - one that was bigger than both of the parents. As it was clear that there was no guardian for the child they took it with them.

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                        I think that might work? What do you think? I could rework it a bit if you wanted. My Miitopia fics take a lot of inspiration from Greek (and other) mythology, it might not be the case for you. I’m taking loads of inspiration from the peach boy/ bamboo girl myths (if I’m remembering correctly, they are both Japanese myths).

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                        1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Sat 29 Jun 2024 01:06PM UTC

                          Thank you so much for writing this!

                          Also, I think this idea should work. It's really interesting!

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                          1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Sat 29 Jun 2024 02:29PM UTC

                            It’s no problem, thought it was interesting and could add a meaning to her name. :)

                            I’m glad that this could work for you! Also, maybe the older kid (the one that the parents had originally) could be Darius? That might make their situation very interesting! And if you want, you can change small details (like make the parents have two kids instead of one)! :)

                            Anyways, you mentioned in the author’s notes that you were trying to rehabilitate an old OC, this is something that is extremely hard… so I’ll share some ideas so that it might help you brainstorm!

                            1. Years have passed since the OC had experienced their trauma, they’ve kinda moved on but they’ll never be the same, and they just want to help prevent people from becoming as jaded as they are. This would probably make them the wine aunt so the group, or a go-to support person.
                            2. The good ol’ amnesia trick! When they were made to help defeat the Dark Lord, they asked for one thing in return, that their bad memories be removed. This could make for some JUICY angst down the line.
                            3. Make them ignore all of their problems, they get extremely angry at small inconveniences just to do something that isn’t thinking about what happened.
                            4. Go with the flow, write it how you want to!

                            Those are my best ideas, they might work… but I don’t bring old OCs back (usually).

                            Also, do you give OCs specific colours and motifs? Or is that just me?

                            For example: Alexis’s motifs are the weather, burning bridges, and swords (when I go into darker territory). And important colours for them are white, mint (because of their outfit), and blood red (also related to darker territory, I’ve hinted as to what that territory is though).

                            Do you do that? All of my characters have something.

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                            1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Sun 30 Jun 2024 07:14AM UTC

                              Hm... I'll consider making the older kid Darius. No clear answer as of now, though.

                              Also, I don't give my OCs specific colours and motifs. I'm pretty sure it's not just you who does that, but I just don't for some reason.

                              Oh, and about the reviving a scrapped OC part, it's going surprisingly well so far! I'm probably just going with option 4 out of the ides you gave, though. I mostly just had to rewrite their backstory to be less edgy and give them a redesign. They were fine otherwise.

                              sorry if i'm not making sense

                              Last Edited Sun 30 Jun 2024 10:08AM UTC

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                              1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Sun 30 Jun 2024 10:08AM UTC

                                Mmhmm, glad it’s working out for you! I’m excited to see the results!

                                Oh yeah, on the backstory, a god (if you have those in your Miitopia AU) could’ve placed Rosemary there. Or it just could’ve been regular Peculia stuff. It’s your choice! :)

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                                1. Pineapple276 on Chapter 12 Sun 30 Jun 2024 11:10AM UTC

                                  Rosemary coming from a giant rose is probably just regular Peculia nonsense. Anything can happen in Peculia. And thanks for supporting my idea to bring back a scrapped character!

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                                  1. Negative_Nova on Chapter 12 Sun 30 Jun 2024 11:15AM UTC

                                    No problem! I have a few old OCs that I wish I could bring back, but the memories are just too cringy.

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