Absolutely wonderful, I loved the way you wrote Dimitri I thought it was a great depiction of his character and Claude as well. Also Dimitri describing his thoughts on Duscur was beautiful.
Hee~! I was a little nervous about writing Claude because I was worried I'd fail to fully capture his teasing, coy nature through dialogue. Good to know i'm succeeding so far. Dimitri is a wonderful font of emotion and I'm enjoying writing from his perspective so far
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AdLunaeLumen on Chapter 1 Tue 10 Sep 2019 12:10AM UTC
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