Thanks! I really tried to make the empathy a multi-sensory experience with emotions evoking different senses and sometimes even combinations of them. In one of the first drafts I had John's life written out chronologically, but I soon realised it worked better as flashbacks as that way I could just write out whatever the important bit was and cut out a lot of tedium.
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Blind_Author on Chapter 1 Mon 29 Dec 2014 04:19AM UTC
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