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'Suddenly she saw a commercial for a LGBTQ+ Youth Program on a college campus that’s available to current and new students. Rumi grabbed the remote and paused the tv when it showed the information needed to join.
Maybe I can do something like that? Would Celine even let me? It’s not available for the public—I have thought about college—I don’t know if I can….
Rumi started to overthink quickly but then got interrupted when her phone began buzzing, showing the caller ID being Bobby. He must be a physic because how else does he time these perfectly'or
Rumi is a masked k-pop idol and tries college life only to fall for two idiotic women and doesn't know what to do about it.
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Skyfaller by HobbitFriend
Fandoms: Pocket Monsters | Pokemon - All Media Types, Pokemon Legends: Arceus (Video Game)
28 Oct 2025
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Lost in time and lost in space, a girl with no memory is stranded alone in the wild Crimson Mirelands, far from the safety of Prelude Beach. Instead of a helpful professor and friendly Pokémon, she is greeted by a torrential downpour. A stranger in a strange land, Akari must adapt and change quickly to survive, and perhaps unravel the secret of her past along the way.
Will update at least once a week on Sundays, possibly more or early if I feel like it.
Delays will be announced ahead of time unless something unexpected and bad happens. Ex:a family member is hit by a car.Series
- Part 1 of Fallers
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Thinking he's finally found a place where he belongs and can truly be himself, someone from Marc Anciel's past comes back to haunt him and test how much he's really healed and who he really is.
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- Part 3 of Miraculous, Simply A Mess
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(the mortifying ordeal of) being known by readwritedelight
Fandoms: DCU, Batman - All Media Types
27 Oct 2025
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Martha and Thomas Wayne wake up one Saturday morning. What’s odd there? Well, yesterday they fell asleep Saturday night. Also, it’s over 30 years in the future, and their son (previously seven) is older than them and also a superhero with a family of superheroes. Sometimes you just have to roll with the punches.
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A Helluva Bad Deal by Serious6665
Fandoms: Helluva Boss (Web Series), Hazbin Hotel (Cartoon)
28 Oct 2025
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Note: I cleaned up the tags and made them a lot better
After the events of Sinsmas, Stolas has been adjusting to the life Blitzø's always lived. He's figured he might as well adjust to it, as he'll be stuck like that for the next hundred years.
During one of Stolas' first missions out, things go wrong. Stolas blacks out, and meets a figure from Hell's past. He makes a deal for his power back, at the consequence of needing to help free a long gone, ancient evil.
He awakens in Beelzebub's home in the wrath ring, discovering he had been out for 6 days. Beelzebub comforts him, while Lucifer tells him exactly who the figure was.
As he grapples with the consequences of the deal, he slowly learns that maybe he shouldn't be so trusting with demons offering power in exchange for his soul.
TLDR: Stolas makes a big mistake.
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AU where God from Hazbin Hotel is back from his vacation...
I will work on this story on my free time so don't expect frequent updates.
I will try to stay as canon as possible, but also add a character to the mix.
If I make a mistake compared to the canon version, please tell me. (I am new to Helluva).(Work in progress...)
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Chorus of Echoes by Xologen
Fandoms: 僕のヒーローアカデミア | Boku no Hero Academia | My Hero Academia (Anime & Manga)
27 Oct 2025
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Izuku wasn’t good. They knew that—had always known that. Every day, for years, he had reminded them, carving reality into their skin with every whisper. And yet, through all of it, they had resisted the pull to become something worse. Until, one day, they just... broke.
Now, they were on their own. No more chains or looming threats of punishment. Just an empty world stretching before them, unfamiliar yet full of potential.
At first, they did nothing. Hollow and empty, the thought of ending it all was ever-present. It would be so easy—just a step and it would all be over. The pain, the suffering, the noise.
But they weren’t alone. Not really.
They were only one part of the chorus, and while they may have been the one in control, the others had their own opinions. And death? Death wasn’t on the itinerary.
So, if they were stuck on this mortal coil a little longer, they might as well make the best of it. Maybe learn what it meant to live, to laugh, and even—to love.
Though, it would probably help if they stopped talking to the voices out loud. People kept staring at them like they were crazy.
Not that they were wrong. But it was terribly inconvenient.
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- Part 3 of Just be yourself, whoever that may be
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In the aftermath of the ever after, Ruby finds herself reincarnated in her Beacon aura. She's angry, at everyone and everything, but the person she hates more than anyone is none other than Pyrrha Nikos, the invincible girl who died for nothing.
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Caroline Forbes thought her life was perfectly normal — until she and Elena Gilbert are abducted by vampires Rose and Trevor. When Elena tries to have either Stefan or Damon compel her to forget, it fails — because Caroline can’t be compelled. Suddenly, she’s thrown into her friends’ supernatural world, only to realize she was part of it all along.
She learns she’s the soulmate of the Original family — the oldest and most powerful beings on Earth — that her father isn’t her real father, and her mother’s been hiding the truth about her identity and bloodline. Now, being their soulmate makes her the most hunted person alive.
And to think, she once believed paying bills with her mom was the hardest part of her life.
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My lovely journey of self-destruction by Maryking07
Fandoms: Inanimate Insanity (Web Series)
27 Oct 2025
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It's been almost two years since a fatal incident occurred on the set of the second season of Inanimate Insanity, which led to the show's indefinite closure. Every Hotel OJ resident seems to have moved on from this, and Microphone is no exception. However, one night after the party, something unexpected happens — Mic begins to have memories of the incident. Trying to get rid of them, she turns to her former friend Taco for help, not realizing that she is only driving herself deeper into a downward spiral from which she won’t be able to escape…
Many thanks to my friend angelil who reviews the translation of this work (English isn't my first language), you're the best!
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Blitz would never admit that he was nervous about whether or not Stolas would enjoy the leech that he caught and cooked. But we all know that Blitz is a bold faced liar! He was sweating, shaking a little and trying desperately to enjoy his dinner.
Then he heard something from Stolas that most would only dream of...
His reaction is what you would expect from the chaotic red imp.
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The first full day in their new home, and the family is all spent on unpacking their stuff. It's after dinner, now, and everyone is hellbent on unwinding. But the end is not nigh for the story at large.
Shiiara and Sakke begin training for realsies.
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- Part 2 of Chudiago Sisters
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Soldier dad and Spider son by ghost_writer616
Fandoms: Batman - All Media Types, DCU, The Avengers (Marvel Movies), Spider-Man - All Media Types
27 Oct 2025
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Peter hunched it back into place quickly, muttering, “Seriously—did New York get a redesign while we weren’t looking? Because this place is…way too Batman-y.”
“Not New York,” Bucky said, voice flat.
“No kidding,” Peter said, half to himself. He shifted, wincing faintly at the bruises blooming under his hoodie. “So what’s the plan? We got no Stark, no Strange, no Avengers…just us. And, you know, a very questionable Uber service through reality.”
Or; Peter and Bucky in Gotham.
Or Or; I went down the Peter in Gotham rabbit hole and Bucky is there ‘cause I can and he’s the best.
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- Part 8 of DCU crossover
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Across the Phantomverse, it’s Halloween night. The magical ghosts Twiggy and Desiree decide to spend it together in Twiggy’s reality, watching Hocus Pocus.
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- Part 669 of one-shots
- Part 204 of DP one-shots
- Part 307 of Therapy stories
- Part 509 of Awareness stories
- Part 57 of Holiday and Anniversary stories
- Part 105 of over coffee
- Part 376 of Modern AU
- Part 153 of Ceci Spirit
- Part 153 of Specter14's AU
- Part 567 of gift fic
- Part 615 of collection stories
- Part 359 of Nicktoons One-shots
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Here I can take up the full of the sky...Unfurling, becoming my full size by altanssnoopy
Fandoms: The Poppy War Series - R. F. Kuang, Hunger Games Series - All Media Types
27 Oct 2025
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Fang Runin as she known to the reaping bowl, knew that one day she would become a tribute in The Hunger Games, what she didn't expect was Yin Nezha, and her complex feelings for him, and apparently the many things people have planned for her. Though she decides to do what her cousin never could, become the Phoenix and bring the president to her knees, but this will have bigger consequences than she realize, especially because not everyone is not who they say they are.
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A hunger games poppy war (mainly rinezha) au. -
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“YOU LOST IT?!”. Were the three words that echoed through the throne room, shaking the large ebony pillars that lined the walls. “WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU LOST IT?!” “Well if Cross ha-”. “I don't care who’s fault it was, this was the easiest mission I have EVER tasked you three with!” A heavy grunt escapes Nightmare as he sinks into his seat. Pinching his nasal ridge. His tentacles dripped and swayed furiously. “Cross, seeing as you were the one leading this mission, do you care to explain what happened?”
Cross steps forward and bows down before the big throne. “Well, uhm, you see…”
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Again, Until We Remember by AmaliaLira246
Fandoms: 全球高考 - 木苏里 | Global Examination - Mù Sū Lǐ
27 Oct 2025
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instead of going to the second exam, they got teleported to a cinema like-room with several invigilators and examinees
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Basically Early Double Examinees react to.
(were it still counted as double examinees era?)
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Flufftober 2025 - day #22 - "Come on. I’ll show you how to dance”
Mio Sarovei & Lücan Serenel, Guilded Thrones
GT2+
Constructive criticism welcome <3
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- Part 23 of Caitlin's BoNY Flufftober Journal <3
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Flufftober 2025 - day #21 - “Our kids are gonna be mwah!”
Gary x Deci, Regolus Dark Age
RDA 38+ and CV2
Constructive criticism welcome <3
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- Part 22 of Caitlin's BoNY Flufftober Journal <3
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Flufftober 2025 - day #20 - "You never told me you could cook"
JB x Aelys, Regolus: Dark Age
gen RDA and spoiler free
Constructive criticism welcome ❤️
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- Part 21 of Caitlin's BoNY Flufftober Journal <3