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So with this being a rewrite obviously that means i changed some things but what I think I should state is this takes inspiration from ZooPhobia, Helluva Boss, and Hazbin Hotel (only the pilot)
Here are all the characters that will be featured in my rewrite, trust me you can skip this, it really is just a ton of lore and when these characters will appear.
Charlie Magne
Charlie is going to be very similar to her pilot variant. Vaggie and Charlie actually meet as kids in my rewrite and are honestly adorable together, Charlie will be in every chapter no matter what. Charlie will do actual royal stuff and we will also see her act naive but not dumb there will be scenes where she acts dumb and naive like when she first meets Vox but she isn't going to be flat out stupid, I mainly don't have a lot to add because she is just an adorable little bean.
Vaggie
Vaggie is first introduced in "Overture" and like Charlie is pretty much in every chapter, Vaggie and Angel Dust share a punishment which in my lore is a quirk sinners have to torment their lives, Vaggie's punishment is when anytime she is stressed, sad, or angry eyes will float around her and make her more insecure. Vaggie is not going to be an Exterminator in my rewrite and instead she is going to be a sinner, well for the most part.
Angel Dust
Angel Dust will remain a fashionable and adorable drag queen, Angel Dust does bad things but means well in the end. Angel Dust will spend most chapters and parts in the background but during the chapter "Hellywood" we see him in a darker light as Charlie follows him to his work. The next time Angel Dust appears in a starring role is the chapter "Family Web" which will be about his family as they come to the hotel to get Angel to rejoin the mafia though Husk is quick to defend Angel but this results in a fight with Angel being kidnapped and forced to marry a girl from a rival mob.
Husk
Husk is the bartender and concierge for the Hazbin Hotel, Husk is going to keep a lot of his original story but Husk will do anything to gain freedom from Alastor even betraying the person he loves. Husk first appears in the chapter "Now Open For Business" and doesn't reappear in a major role till "Hellywood" Husk is pretty much the exact same as i stated before but you'll see how he acts in the story.
Baxter
Baxter is the hotel's resident scientist and bellboy, Baxter was roped into the hotel because Alastor couldn't think of anyone else to summon so as he puts it in "Now Open For Business" Baxter is practically his most worthless soul that he owns. Baxter is weak in almost everything he does and is the weakest soul in probably all of Hell.
Alastor, Rosie and the Other Cannibals
Alastor first appears in "Now Open For Business" and is again almost every chapter, Alastor can speak French and does it often when his around people he trusts. Alastor is always super stylish and he has family in Hell some you will be surprised to meet.
The next is Rosie, Rosie appears in "Now Open For Business" but doesn't appear and is really only mentioned, she doesn't appear again until "Moth to a Flame" this chapter has Vaggie deal with her punishment getting to bad to wear nothing can calm her down except the motherly talk of Rosie, Alastor and Rosie have a very mother son relationship as Rosie will usually be seen stroking his hair to help him calm down or sleep. All the cannibals are fashionable and only dance to "Hello Dolly" if you wear anything past 1950 you're dead.
Niffty is just Niffty, she's batshit insane!
Now we move onto the side characters have a very minor role.
Cherri Bomb
Cherri Bomb is the best friend to Angel Dust and is quite a party girl but she understands when enough is enough like when she comforts him in "Hellywood" which is when she first appears in the story, I wanted to differentiate my version of Cherri Bomb from canon and fan interpretations by making her ftm. Cherri Bomb doesn't join the hotel until real late in the story she'll join the hotel in the second season as a means of protecting Angel Dust as she views the hotel unsafe to protect him.
Sir Pentious
The wannabe Overlord, Sir Pentious. Pentious really doesn't appear and is only mentioned by Cherri Bomb when she talks about how bad their fights can get with Cherri mentioning how despite losing all the time Pentious continues to fight against her until it is revealed he has a crush at the end of season 2 by kissing her directly on extermination day. Sir Pentious is a master of hypnotism and despite being very powerful Pentious can be idiotic and this causes his powers to no longer work.
Adam
Adam is going to be antagonistic like his canon counterpart but there will be more to him than him just being a misogynist, he's complex and part of him is hurt by the exterminations as he still sees every sinner as his descendant but since he works under Adina he can do nothing but watch and obey her command. Now with Lute I changed her from being Adam's girlfriend to being Adam's daughter, while it may seem like an odd change I believe Adam and Eve should stay together.
Adina:
For those who don't know who Adina is, she is from the ZooPhobia series which is the parent comic to the original Hazbin Hotel, basicallly Adina was like canon Adam. Adina enjoys watching sinners suffer and states it is in the good will of the lord which is just false but no dares to defy her, also in this rewrite Adina is the mother of Sera and Emily. Get ready for the drama
Head canon Voice: MilkyMelodies.
Next up on characters is Lucifer and Lilith (yes I am talking about them both at once)
We all know how Lucifer acts in the show, a cute ducky boy which hey I like it but come on he can be so much more threatening so this rewrite basically will make Lucifer like the fan interpretations from before the show. Lucifer is never going to be supportive to Charlie's dream and doesn't appear until late in the story in the chapter "LuLu World." Now for Lilith I rewrote her to be on tour throughout the other rings and she'll appear in season 2/ the second arc.
God:
While God technically doesn't exist in the canon of the Hellaverse for my rewrite God is going to be way different than most interpretations I've seen, for my version God is going to be a theatrical character always strutting and always treating life as a performance. God appears first through flashbacks by Lucifer and during the flashback chapter Lucifer talks about his mother and father during a bedtime story for Charlie. God then finally makes his grand debut in the chapter "Welcome to Heaven"
Head canon Voice: Luke Holt
Mother Earth:
Mother Earth is the Goddess of Life and the wife to God and mother of every first gen angel. Mother Earth loves to spread life anf fertility everywhere and she loves her kids so much even Lucifer, unlike God who has become bitter Mother Earth still loves her son and is ecstatic when she learns she has a granddaughter. Mother Earth first appears in chapter "Mother's Day" and then appears in "Welcome to Heaven"
Head canon Voice: Christina Vee.
Emily:
Emily is the daughter to the divine judge Adina, Emily is adorable and naive and absolutely loves Charlie's idea for the hotel. I don't want to change much about Emily and my only real change is Emily's origins and who her family is as I want to keep her mostly the same but with a few changes to change her to make her different from her canon counterpart. Emily will appear in the chapter "Welcome to Heaven"
Seraphiel "Sera"
Sera is the Head Seraph of Heaven and works directly under her mother, I wanted to make Sera basically two characters in one, when Sera is with her mother she enjoys the exterminations and revels in the thought of watching Hell burn but when she is with Emily she puts on a soft sisterly tone to ease her pain. My version of Sera can best be described as a mix of Kovu from the Lion King and The Golden Guard from the Owl House. Sera doesn't appear in "Welcome to Heaven" and her debut appearance is in the chapter "Never Meet Your Heroes"
Now here are the villains
Valentino
Valentino is the Overlord of Pornography and all other forms of sin, Valentino is a smug horrible jerk like his canon counterpart but he is shown to have a soft spot for Velvet as he sees her as a daughter and will do anything to protect her. Valentino first appears in the chapter "Hellywood" where we see two sides of Valentino, the side we saw in the show who is an abusive director and "boyfriend" to Angel Dust but a very fatherly version of his character is shown when we see him with Velvet as the main message of Hazbin has always been "Anyone can be redeemed if they try" I want to pull the heartstrings of those who read for my version of Valentino.
Vox
Vox is the Overlord of Television and technology and owns the souls to almost all the entertainment overlords (aside from Valentino and Velvet) Vox is a massive jerk who is basically Elon Musk, Jeff Bezos, and Walt Disney all in one. Vox and Valentino's relationship is very rocky and annoying for both of them as they both have differing opinions on their "daughter" Valentino loves Velvet and treats her like she is a toddler while Vox couldn't both either having her in his life and has on numerous occasions tried to mail her away, jokes aside Vox first appears in the chapter "Revamption Not Allowed"
Velvet
Velvet is the Overlord of Social Media and Fashion, and is the PR for her two "dads" though she doesn't do a very good job at it. Velvet is very childish and just plain stupid, I based my version off of the old Voxtagram posts combined with some of my own ideas. Velvet is first mentioned in the chapter "Revamption Not Allowed" and makes her debut in "Hellywood" where she attempts to get Vaggie to sign a modeling contract and attempts to own her soul. Velvet may not physically abuse her workers but she gives them eating disorders and emotionally abuses them.
Carmilla Carmine
Carmilla Carmine is the Overlord of Weaponry and Protection, Carmilla appears in the season 2 chapter "Meet Your Masters" at the end of the chapter she and Vaggie have a conversation where she describes herself as "an angel without the gift of wings" she is a very morbid and sad character that will honestly shock you when I do the final season. Carmilla really is just a more depressed version of her canon self as she is very motherly towards her daughters and even Vaggie.
Camilla
Camilla is a character from ZooPhobia who I have repurposed for my rewrite of Hazbin Hotel, I want to emulate a lot of what ZooPhobia did with this character mixed in with my own ideas. Camilla is a twenty one year old human sinner who is most notably the most human looking reflecting her nature, she is very misunderstood and everyone in Hell thinks of her as an easy side piece to have though she is much more than that. Camilla will appear in the season 1b chapter "Dancin' Dirty"
Head canon Voice: Jennifer Paz
Roo
Roo is going to be the main villain, i am not revealing any lore for her until her debut.
Head Canon Voice: KJ Burkhauser